Black Card
What is a card but a key to enter a world,
A world that is mine by blood, not by creed, but because I am the fruit of father’s seed,
A fruit that can only show half its flowers, a half which is too bright, whilst shrouded in darkness,
A darkness unpalatable to some whilst unfathomable to others,
A faux darkness guided by observance as much as teaching,
Why must my darkness be called into question, is it not too dark?
Is it not too black?
Am I not too black?
Am I black?
Identity should be, must be, celebrated loudly
But what if my celebration causes discomfort?
Must I quiet my pride?
Am I placating the wrong side?
I go to swipe my card...
Denied.
About this poem
I wrote this poem as a way of expressing my identity in the hopes that someone can relate and feel their experience reflected in writing.
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Written on November 29, 2023
Submitted by shaniceweekes233 on November 29, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | X X X X X X A A A X X B B X |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 684 |
Words | 154 |
Stanzas | 14 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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