When I close my eyes I am not here



When I close my eyes I am not here
But do not ask me where I go to my dear
For the place would likely bring your eyes to tears
It's lights warmth might melt the skin off your prescious life
Its time claims whole beings for it's wife
Yet I go there beyond the sweet lullabies
I am not here but for my sleepy disguise
And the people dash about before my eyes
So perfect and beautiful they cannot tell me lies
For they hear the soul and listen deeply to her cries
She complains too much only to herself
Their love far too strong for her to keep
on life's shelf
When I close my eyes I am not here
But do not ask me where I go to my dear
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Written on December 06, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABcddeeeeefgfAB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 632
Words 133
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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