My Father’s Already Pleased (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



My Father’s Already Pleased   (Bussokusekika)

Well Alexandra
At least you are attempting
To take your mask off
How long must I live my vow
Of being a Nazarite
My Father’s already pleased

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/04/2023

About this poem

I am still a man in the fleshly sense…I enjoy giving sweet Hershey’s kisses to the woman whom I love…Even though I have never been on the receiving end of such sweet delights…I do believe you once told me about it would be your pleasure…And I am a starving Marvin who has an insatiable appetite for a sweet delectable Georgia peach…Shall I go on???I am not very well endowed but I do try to make up for it in the previously mentioned ways…I hope I didn’t make you blush. . 

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Written on December 04, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 04, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XAXXBB X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 236
Words 41
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1

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