If You Should Prosper

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



If You Should Prosper

As I sit her killing time
Thinking up a simple rhyme
To let you know how I feel
With this love I know its real
‘Tis there within words we write
Through these long and lonely nites
I think of you with lead in hand
Longing to buy you a wedding band
If I could give one unto you
Would you feel that our love is true
And could we live a happy life
Should we become husband and wife
With all of our cats
We could build a house
Without any walls
Or that lazy louse
Would it be proper
If you should prosper

P.s.I’m sorry I’ve stayed away so long
Yet through the noise I hear those songs
As if they are calling unto me
Even though I am too blind to see
I am still capable of hearing
And I feel as if we are nearing

Edwin Tanguma   08/24/2002

About this poem

From the dark years collection…There are not many left in said collection…Alice…And once they are thru…We’ll…I believe I have already made my intentions clear…If you continue to hide behind your masks and do not present your self as your true self…And proclaim to the world that which I have proclaimed that I feel for you…You will see a side of me that narci and her flying monkeys are just now beginning to see of me…If you do not feel the same for me…Well I guess that I too must move on with my life without you…Then again there is the possibility that me believing that I am in love with Jewel Kilcher could just be a part of my dilusions…I think I can adapt and overcome to a life without this wonderland being a part of it…How is this for pretty lies or reality???

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Written on August 24, 2002

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 04, 2023

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Scheme A bbccxdeeffggddddaA xdxdhh x
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 764
Words 161
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 18, 6, 1

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