Cheek of Child



“Cheek of Child”

War cuts deep into cheek of child
Winged young warrior, flesh of peace
A heinous death unreconciled

An angel slain as Satan smiled
The irony will never cease
War cuts deep into cheek of child

Uplifted to the heavens wild,
On downy wings of sacred geese
A heinous death unreconciled

The sacrifice, stilly reviled,
on captive tongues with no release
War cuts deep into cheek of child

By savages, virtues defiled
What hope for evil to decease?
A heinous death unreconciled

Bids righteous spirits, once exiled,
to wrap the child in shepherd’s fleece
—an offering for earthly peace
War cuts deep into cheek of child
A heinous death unreconciled

About this poem

Frustrated by the suffering of all, especially the children, the most vulnerable victims of war. I search for hope and light, but when I think of all the suffering and dying children in the world, I feel so angry and discouraged.

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Written on February 16, 2022

Submitted by susan.brumel on November 20, 2023

Modified by susan.brumel on November 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme a AbA abA abA abA abA abbAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 672
Words 123
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 5

Susan Mayer Brumel

A few years ago, I retired from a thirty-five year career in hospice counseling, at which time I began writing poetry. My poems are influenced by my patients’ journeys, the compelling beauty of nature, and the human condition. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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3 Comments
  • yelskwah
    The poem's strength lies in its ability to confront the brutal realities of war with unflinching honesty and emotional depth. You used the villanelle form and vivid imagery to create a powerful and deeply moving poem. 
    LikeReply20 days ago
  • ladyygracious
    Heart-wrenching.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • philmaund
    I share your anger!
    LikeReply4 months ago
    • susan.brumel
      Just saw this one too. Sorry!
      Thank you for sharing my anger. What a world, What a world!
      LikeReply1 month ago

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