Whisper in the wind



Whisper In The Wind

Like a rain fall falling down
She only dries up in time
Like ice on fire if close enough
She’ll burn your eyes
Just cause I’m not physically there
Doesn’t mean I’m truly gone
I’ve just become a whisper in
the wind

Time to time bring flowers
To that cross where I lay under
Ground
I wish I could do it all over again
Listen to me I’m a whisper in the wind
Sometimes a spark never becomes a flame
Remember a true love can last a lifetime

We’ve removed bricks from life’s solid wall
Not once did she ever fall
Something innocent as a child waving goodbye
Please live life to the fullest I’ll still be by your side
Somethings truly never die footprints left in sand
I’d give up anything just to hold your hand
For now I’m a whisper in the wind

I know it wasn’t easy you’ll never find
Love like this again falling star slipping from your hand
When winter approaches you become cold
I’m no longer there to hold you
Remember spring is around the corner
Plant your flowers once more grab a memory
From the sky take time to laugh
Everything that begins must find it’s end
Listen to me I’ve become a whisper in the wind

Rene Clements
Oct 6 2023

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Losing a loved one

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Written on October 06, 2023

Submitted by Janetp-c on October 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XBXXXXXA XCXXAXB DDXXEEA AEXXCXXXA XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,215
Words 252
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 7, 7, 9, 2

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