My Last I Love You



My Last I Love You
To My Lovely Enchanted Angel,
This will be My Last Poem of Love for You,
My Heart is Shattered in Pieces Once Again,
By The One that is Supposed to be My Backbone,
My Life that was Supposed to Grow Old Together was With You,
I have been spat upon while down on my knees,
Begging You to Please Believe,
Blinded by the Lies You Don’t See My Truth that I’ve Been Showing You,
Even Tears dropping from My Eyes,
Doesn’t Reach the Passion & Soul Inside of You,
The Love that you once had for me I see is Now Gone,
Saddened by the thought I once had it in the palm of my hands,
I did not appreciate It at the time and until it was so late in life,
I finally realized that I did not truly get a chance to show you True Love,
For another has tampered with My Lovely Enchanted Angel,
That these Real Emotions Naturally Ended,
Destroying happiness amongst others not of only your own,
Not realizing these actions,
You’ve taken to Hurt Me as a Revenge,
For what I’ve seen the lies of others got to you,
Making you not Believe My Truths of Love for You,
All of This would Soon Go and Fade Away,
Maybe Someday My Love Will Finally Reach That Heart of Yours,
But By Then Will Be Too Late,
I would’ve already been Taken and Gone with the Wind,
Not heard from again,
And Only Then Will You Remember My Love I Tried to Show and Give to You,
And how You Turned it Away Stabbing My Back,
All these years Together you’ve just burned away like they’re nothing,
Why did you have to lie and not communicate with me,
Your actions and intentions,
Could’ve Been the Only Way that Saved Our Love from Ending,
You’ve instead given Your Love to Someone other than I,
Not even I have ever given My Love Away to Any other but You,
This is why This Is My Last I Love You.

About this poem

I wrote this poem to my ex of 18 years trying to save our love from ending.

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Written on August 20, 2023

Submitted by ren.naf on October 09, 2023

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Scheme ABACDAEFAGAHIJKBLDMNAAOPQRCASTUMTVAA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,777
Words 381
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36

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