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Just one more try

Rah thee designa 1985 (Queens)

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Pain pain leaving me a broken heart
my strings detached, to my pumping valve
No bike no car, I walked for miles
Trying to find my Why, who when and where
Friends who left me bare
Girls who left with no care
I still ask why
When I'm lost inside, and wanna die
I'll give it "just one more try"

About this poem

It's about not giving up, that this isn't the only time you'll feel pain, they'll be more, when you feel like giving up, make it, Just one more try.

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Written on October 30, 2023

Submitted by differentclothclothing2018 on October 30, 2023

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Scheme ABCDDDEEE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 294
Words 63
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
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Rah thee designa

Name Rashed age 38 born in Manhattan raised in Queens, Ny been great at writing. Discovered he had a talent in H.s Martin van Buren H.s when he entered a poetry contest and won 1st place out of principal list students and dean's list students. He continues on the passion hoping to one day get paid to go on a poetey tour and perform. more…

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