Damage is done



The damage is done to the impairment of love.
The damage is done,sing to the skies above.
You took my heart in your hostile hands and tore it to the ground.
You look at me, with that empty face,and no words to be found.
I need to hear, I'm worth it here,and I'm not just be
discarded
I see the way you've been for years, I'm just so broken hearted
I need the feeling of your hand reaching out for mine.
I want to feel your love for me all the freaking time.
You've never been through a hurt in this world,your feelings become numb
When I tell the truth of it, to you its all so dumb.
A hollow heart don't go to far in this world we live
Empathy is a perfect thing,my soul it does exist.
Now take these words their coming from my dramatic poem.
Gain a heart a peaceful you, or we can't call it home.
Think of me with all you got because I feel it gonna end.
For the things you've  never said,your not even my friend
The damage is done im to hurt, my mind is on the run
My other half don't understand that the damage is done.

About this poem

Just the struggles of years in a relationship , not getting feels. Just in my head.

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Written on October 10, 2023

Submitted by jodi_j on October 10, 2023

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Scheme AABBCDEFGHHIJHKLLMM
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,025
Words 225
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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