between the AI and I Am



between the AI and the I Am

between the AI
and the I Am
a fervent viewer
the moon in full
in the turning of its orbit
in the mythic stories told
in the reflection of its light and a fulfillment of our flight

between the AI
and the I Am
a beachcomber
washing my feet
in the age old source
in the constancy of change
in the rhythm of the tide
and a surfer’s momentary ride

between the AI
and the I Am
a solitary human
breathing deeply
in the atmosphere
in the anxious state of being
in the midst of countless names and a recognition of loss and gains

between the AI
and the I Am
a loving searcher
living in full
in the values of belongings
in the challenge of earthly time in the meeting of our eyes
and the joy of momentary sighs

between the AI
and the I Am
a caring human
children born
in the passion of primal forces in the evenings candle glow
in the sun light and the shade and the years of memories made

between the AI
and the I Am
I Am
Rainer Neumann

About this poem

woke up in the night and came up with the connection of AI in the news everywhere and the play with I Am...which prompted the verses...

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Written on September 29, 2023

Submitted by beckertz on October 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme a BAcdxxx BAcxxxee BAfxxxx BAcdxgg BAfxxx BAaf
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 963
Words 200
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 8, 7, 7, 6, 4

Rainer Neumann

Since my retirement I have devoted my life to poetry and pastel drawings. I have had two exhibitions - Cafe Society 2017 and Ebbtide Cafe 2018 and have a current exhibit at HMB Coffee Company. Out of these exhibits I have published two exhibit books as well as a book of pastels produced over a 20 year period - “Fron Pigeon Point to Point Reyes”. Two poetry books - “Intersections of Concern” and “Our time has just begun” have also been published and are available on-line along with three books of fiction and two books of translation - a poetry book and a journal from the second world war. more…

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  • paul.marsden1968
    This poem tells a story and the riff on AI and I am is something fresh.
    LikeReply5 months ago

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