BLACK RAIN



Black rain is falling
From a loathsome black sky,
Even birds hide atop trees
Terrified to try to fly.

Black rain and black snow
Both spread across the ground,
Turning daytime into night
Within a small luckless town.

Pollution fills our atmosphere
Diseases spread from black rain,
Washing away all our dreams
Replacing them with only pain.

Black rain burning like acid
When it lands upon your flesh,
Black rain choking your oesophagus
Stealing away your breath.

Children squealing in terror
Adults running away to hide,
Animals burrowing underground
When they cannot get back inside

Black snow follows black rain
Leaving the city a smoking mess,
Devastating animals and plants
Shrivelling trees and forests.

Whenever black rain starts to fall
The innocents start to die,
Women try to comfort children
As terrified babies start to cry.

THE END
© Copyright 2023 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

About this poem

Black rain is falling From a loathsome black sky, Even birds hide atop trees Terrified to try to fly.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on October 19, 2023

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on October 19, 2023

49 sec read
1

Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XCXX XDXD XXBX XECE DXXX XAXA XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 913
Words 166
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3

Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

All Phil Roberts poems | Phil Roberts Books

7 fans

Discuss the poem BLACK RAIN with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "BLACK RAIN" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/171577/black-rain>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    14
    hours
    49
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "School Boy" as a part of the poetry collection entitled "Songs of Experience"?
    A Robert Frost
    B William Wordworth
    C Walt Whitman
    D William Blake