The 36
I liked it here
I liked the fog on the window and the heart that i drew slowly into the wetness
watching it melt away
I liked the collection of warm breath that heated the bus
I liked the smell of stale coffee that stained my senses
I liked the hustle and bustle of morning chats that strangers tightly held with each other
I liked the distant cars racing in the background eager to make it to where ever they needed to be
I liked it here, I didn’t want to get off
I liked the energetic red lights that coated the inside of my eyes guiding me safely to my seat
but I didn’t like the man staring at my legs
and I didn’t like the way he taunted me with his silent thoughts
I didn’t like the women who sat firmly on my coat, restraining me to my hard seat
I didn’t like the youthful boys that piled onto the bus making a ruckus that could be heard for days
but I did like it here
I loved the morning bus
About this poem
About the feelings endured on the morning bus taken to school
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Written on September 19, 2023
Submitted by marciedunn07 on September 19, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | A BXBXXX X C XXCX AB |
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Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 926 |
Words | 199 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 6, 1, 1, 4, 2 |
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