Pretty stars on the wall

Angel Zimu 2007 (Gauteng)



Environment peaceful,
It's like the bubbles of cuteness,
Elevates my inner soul with happiness,
My breath sways away like the breeze
That brushes my skin.

On my left
I feel the sand elongates the vibrations
In my body through and through,
I feel the warm breeze in my nostrils
Smelling tree-like.

I look around a see trees swaying,
Communicating in a peaceful language,
I look above I see a wall filled with stars,
One brighter, one dimmer,
All forming fascinating shapes and patterns.

In a peaceful palace,
A graceful bubble that makes my heart jump,
Where the beautiful surroundings bring tears'
It's where I belong.

About this poem

I am painting the picture I had in my mind in the beach at night.

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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by johannazimu on September 10, 2023

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Scheme XAAXX XXXXX XXXXX AXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 622
Words 122
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 4

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