Piteous Proletariat



While aversely obliging
decadent demands
of the reigning, endorsed  affluent,
an internal voice howls
interposingly loud
and insists I really shouldn’t:

“pitiful, weary worker,
Coerced, uncaringly ordered
and damned by upper class rules,
will you ever tire
of being a servile martyr...
of acquiescently singing the blues?”

Yet indignantly yielding I remain,
for on the altar of entrenched conformity,
sacrificed is this entrancing sound
of truth and reason by an ear-piercing,
reticent silence en masse.
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Written on 2014

Submitted by camillerosecastillo on September 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBXXB CXXCCX XXXAX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 511
Words 86
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 5

Camille Rose Castillo

Camille Rose Castillo is from the city of Chicago. She has been writing poetry for over twenty years. She currently holds a B.S. in Criminal Justice. . more…

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  • Charles2
    Dark stormy blues through and through
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