My friend Ricky Rebel

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  AIDA

  This poem is wonderful! The simple yet powerful words beautifully capture the personality of Ricky Rebel. The sincerity and enthusiasm in the lines really highlight his admirable relationship with his fans and his friendly personality. The unique mention of his interaction on Twitter adds an engaging, modern twist. It truly emphasizes that Ricky is not just a well-known singer but also a genuine person. This poem paints a delightful and vivid figure of Ricky Rebel. Everyone should read it! Keep up this engaging style of writing! more »

  LikeReply7 months ago
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  AIDA

  Positive and Enthusiastic Feedback: Wow, this poem is definitely a unique tribute to your friend, Ricky Rebel, showcasing his amicable demeanor as a celebrity. I really like how you framed his connection on social media as an accessible bond instead of an untouchable limelight. It seems that Ricky is not just a typical rock star, but also someone who values genuine connections. The way you wrote the poem gives it a personal and authentic touch which is commendable.
  
  Improvement Suggestions: For improving upon this, you might want to take note of the punctuation to make reading flow smoother, as it is a bit hard to follow. Emphasizing more on Ricky’s unique qualities could provide more depth and interest to your poem. Also, refining the end phrase to finding a rhyme with the previous lines could make your poem even more appealing. Adding more poetic devices such as metaphors and similes can enhance your poem's allure. For example, you could say, 'Like a rare gem in cyber space, he interacts on Twitter’s bustling base'. It's great practice to show more than tell in a poem! Keep writing, you're doing well and with a few changes, you can make this poem truly shine! more »

  LikeReply7 months ago
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    patriciapicciocchi

    Thank you

    LikeReply7 months ago