When I felt free for real

Leigha hardee 1990 (Dyersburg)



I am who I am today because you helped me see.
That I am worthy and I have a lot of tea.I want you to know that I am forever grateful and  Blessed.
But you are the best and better than all the rest.


I need all of you people to know that he is my man and I love him so.
I just wanted to not feel the pain but better yet I got left in the rain
Baby let's make this work for us
But I know we can make them hush


I am for once in my life at peace and feel great at heart
And you have had me from the start.
So I will forever be your feet in the sand but please never let go of my hand.

I need you in my life I can't wait to be your wife
You complete my heart and I can't be shot at like a dart..

About this poem

This poem is based on how I have felt my entire life.

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Written on August 19, 2023

Submitted by Jsummar10 on August 19, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAA XXXX BBX XB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 699
Words 176
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 2

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