THANKYOU



I feel that you took everything I was and left me a shell,
I need to say thankyou for that and goodbye as well.
You see, I am Margie 2.0 now and it feels great,
Stronger, wiser, better for it I’m not feeling any hate.
I’ll never regret a thing I refuse to ever look back.
And look through the eyes of regret at what I lack.
Thanks again because of you I’m able to upgrade,
My love for you is the only part of me that stayed,
But that love for you wasnt healthy please understand.
One day you’ll see that and unclench your hand.
I dont believe that theres ever a wrong path,
It is what is look to the future not the past.
I wish you could see things from my point of view,
And treat everyday as a chance to recreate a new.
Don’t ever doubt that the universe has a plan,
That you wont always come to understand.
I really wish you the best from the bottom of my heart,
Your happiness really is all I ever wanted from the start.

About this poem

I wrote this poem a few years ago after a breakup.

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Written on 2018

Submitted by margiemumma23 on August 26, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDDEEFGHHIEJJ
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 934
Words 204
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

Margaret Macfarlane

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