Analysis of THANKYOU



I feel that you took everything I was and left me a shell,
I need to say thankyou for that and goodbye as well.
You see, I am Margie 2.0 now and it feels great,
Stronger, wiser, better for it I’m not feeling any hate.
I’ll never regret a thing I refuse to ever look back.
And look through the eyes of regret at what I lack.
Thanks again because of you I’m able to upgrade,
My love for you is the only part of me that stayed,
But that love for you wasnt healthy please understand.
One day you’ll see that and unclench your hand.
I dont believe that theres ever a wrong path,
It is what is look to the future not the past.
I wish you could see things from my point of view,
And treat everyday as a chance to recreate a new.
Don’t ever doubt that the universe has a plan,
That you wont always come to understand.
I really wish you the best from the bottom of my heart,
Your happiness really is all I ever wanted from the start.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFGHHIEJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101101101 111111110111 11111010111 101010111110101 110010110111011 011011011111 1010111110101 1111101011111 11111110101 111110111 11011110011 111111010101 11111111111 0110110111001 11011010101 11111101 11011011010111 1100101111010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 934
Words 204
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 712
Words per stanza (avg) 186

About this poem

I wrote this poem a few years ago after a breakup.

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Written on 2018

Submitted by margiemumma23 on August 26, 2023

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Margaret Macfarlane

when I'm struggling with feelings and thoughts I find putting it on paper in words that rhyme really help putting it in perspective. more…

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