I feel empty without you



I wanna you be in my life.

I'd never forget you.

You've changed my life.

That's why I love you.

You made me a different guy.

Who's hopeful for having you for ever.

But what a tragedy happened to this guy.

When I found out can't see you for ever.

Now only sadness and madness have left for me.

It's driving me crazy now I feel empty without you.

There's no purpose for me.

There's nothing I'd do without you.

How could leave me.

This cruel world has taken you away.

Now I wanna run away.

There's nowhere to go.

Everything reminds me of you.

Where should I go now?

What should I do now?

What's the point of keeping on?

Who was I before you?

Everybody say you gotta move on.

But how can I forget you?

I've written my will my last words.

I'm afraid of darkness but you know I'd do anything for you.

About this poem

This poem is about a guy who has lost his love and it has broken him.

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Written on August 19, 2023

Submitted by Smahdi84712 on August 18, 2023

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Scheme A B A B C D C D E B E B E F F X B G G H B H B X B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 842
Words 205
Stanzas 25
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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