All It took

David kpukumu 2001 (Freetown)



Had love that I felt it
What I felt is was what I said it
This good days I'd deserved it
Then I lost like it's my habit
Pains became my addicts
My life codes I couldn't add it
Cause if I'd add it it was half bits
And the hard beats was
like a heartbeat


Those days I did cry
In the night times it did fly
Questions but no reply
Fleeings but no imply
Broke me to booklyn
I'm love torn so it's fooling
Till it's felt like so confusing
Who's winning who's looking


I gave in my brains in
I begged you to stay in
Just wait me so waiting
But all you do was the same thing
Like all You did was the late memes
All you did was to hate me
All you did was to break me
Now you tell me you wake me

Cause you break me
What're you waiting
It's relating
Devastating
The hating
It's taking
The love lines separating
The ghost mode the rating
This love lost so it's fating
From the dating
To the main scene
This pills like
Amazing


Cause it's too love to loose love
And true love was like ruled off
Like who know how it ruled us
Now pissed off no rules up
Cause mindset was the aspect
Now Out there it's the high set
What felt like love so difficult
So difficult so much it's hurt

Cause all you did was to replace me
Out of love so it's make me
Who I was but it's interesting
In this mess still learnt my lessons.

About this poem

A girl I love so much but turned out to love my best friend after all I have done to make her educated

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Written on August 23, 2023

Submitted by kpukumudavid999 on August 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAXBAXXX CCCCDEEE DDEEBFFF FEEEEEEEEEDXE XXXXXXXX FFEX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,306
Words 282
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 9, 8, 8, 13, 8, 4

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