R + N 4ever



Their initials are scooped
into the curb of the
grocery’s parking lot,
the remains of a promise
collecting age,
the glances of passersby.
 
I imagine the
authors crouching
there, fat-fingering
into concrete their
receipt from having
loved,
 
not thinking of
the day when the letters
would weather into
nooks for dirt,
and the pavement would
cease to sparkle.
 
Still, how smart they were
to write it down.
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Written on 2016

Submitted by rcadefyre on September 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXXXA ABBXBX XXAXXX XX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 407
Words 76
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 2

Elliot Greiner

 · 1994 · New Orleans

Elliot Greiner is an American writer active since the 2010s. more…

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