My God isn't welcomed here



my god who is that they speak of
in the churches and on the street
this is not a world my God is taught
definitely not a world He is preached

when were your laws labeled as mosaic
did not You give them to him on the mount
did not your word repeat the laws You said
so many places one could lose count

when did simply being kind make me a follower
and let peoples life crumble in sin
why is a "real" Christian is a speaker of nice things
and to speak raw bible truth is Christian faking

the world doesn't speak or love  my God
and let me tell you why
lying, kindness, and immorality thrive
and He'd be cancelled for making them cry
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Written on August 25, 2023

Submitted by Lakeyahg01 on August 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XAXA XXXX XBXB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 638
Words 135
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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