Between
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
Reading between the lines in fleeting thoughts
at the threshold of our knowing
obscured, rather than enhanced
by our perspective parallax,
Losing the wealth of vision
seen better in depth
As if blurred by apparent inconsistencies,
Perhaps because what existed before
we have this day together
as long as pieces of pasts
remain a facade of fading memories
Things we seldom share
which were in reality
were never quite what they seemed to be
To coincide with the tides of our relationships
Rising
Falling
at the whims of our greatest need
Emotions feeding waves
of motions traced
By no mere coincidence
to appear to us,
Whenever we allow
former shadows of ourselves,
make intrusions into our self-conscious sight
seeing our greater life dancing between
Rising to find
all traces of love in our relationships,
hopelessly shattered and further,
destroyed
Our treasured commitments
Fundamental in fulfilling our need for love
Made null and void
devastation beyond saving grace
losing, our sacred space
Even to the point of poisoning
the womb of our greater understanding
of a need to keeping our relationships healthy and strong
Most importantly
the salvation of its seed…
Instead of just making it
the bookmark in a story
Continuing to fall helplessly
back into the stream
Where being in love
has never really found meaning,
just a moments passage
in passing
merely A patron to the extreme,
In quiet moments felt in gently kept
Emotions gleaned, fed by tears
to cleanse away
The harsh reality
and fear,
that we have lost…
That we shall forever remain alone
What could be never for us
Beings composed of pure living energies
Whenever we cry as love beings,
as if to atone for imagined transgressions
worthy of self-sacrifice
Bring to mind the persistent truth,
even though we may be blind apart
together we see.
For in our hearts we help
each other
even in our dreams
C2
Copyright ©2023 CEF2
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Written on 2008
Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023
Modified by Charles2 on August 25, 2023
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