The dandelion clock

Royston 1946 (Reading)



I picked the loades dandelion stem and I blew
watching each of the seedlings as they flew.
1-o’clock, 2-o’clock, counting each hour,
hoping each seed would become a new flower.

7-o’clock, 8-o’clock, they wafted into the sky
11-o’clock, 12-o’clock, as the hours flew by.
15-o’clock, 16-o’clock, I was having such fun
watching each seedling fly up to the sun

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Remembering my grandson having so much fun with a dandelion that had gone to seed. I was chuckling because he was running out of puff and had called out 26-o’clock as he blew away the last seedling

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Submitted by royston on August 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 373
Words 64
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

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