Hold on

Joshua Boys 2004 (Goedverwacht)



your only response is to be nice and except
But deep inside you know that the way your acting doesnt support your principals.
You get to talk with her one last time .
Yet  again you just exept
You stupid "MF"
But it was inevitable
Till this day that was your only response
When will you learn and exept the fact that your just normal.
And not one of the checkpoints in someone else's life...
Its time to say goodbye and move on

But the words, "Moving on"  keeps you up till late and she doesn't know that ,,
How will she ever know if your keeping it all to yourself...
You begin to question yourself,
Why?
Why are you like this?
Who are you?
Why?
Why?
Why?
 You come to a conclusion
You need change
But changing is for the weak

But your told that admiting your weak is the first path to becoming strong.

Hold on

Hold on

About this poem

It is about love and choices

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Written on July 13, 2023

Submitted by joshuacollinberthallboys123 on August 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme axxabcxcbx xbbDxxDDDxxx x
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 829
Words 182
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 12, 1

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