The Prevailing Flag



It was just a year ago when the breeze whispered, when the duets of sparrows and blue jays were heard, when the cloudless skies devoid of contrails hugged the wheat fields soon burned.
 
Hesitantly, I tip toed to the piano, my wrist shaken, my fingers curved back. My fingertips skimmed both keys—the gun powder white and oil black.
 
Closing my eyes, my parent’s Kyiv apartment, blood red brick appeared. It was a square once crowded,  but now even crickets cleared.
 
As I refocus my foot on the pedal and blindly place my hands, the melodies hold one another so each note rings their voice. My fingers danced to the melody of Ukraine, the great Chervona Ruta we sat around the camp fire and rejoiced.
 
Although outside, the whispers became taunts and screams, our flag stood sturdy on its pole. The unity in its pieces held it through whatever toll.
 
As these same sparrows launched themselves at the blue and gold fabric, I realized that they only clawed a minute hole.

About this poem

I wrote this poem to honor the prevailing strength of Ukraine through the conflict. It shows the dynamic shift of two birds, blue jay and sparrow (symbolizing the close cultural relations of both Ukraine and Russia), drift apart from one another. It also accounts the emotions and reactions of my parents and I when the escalation of our homeland was first broadcasted. I tell my reaction through figurative movements of my piano, which is a way I channel my emotions.

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Written on July 10, 2023

Submitted by Langburdy on July 10, 2023

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