Better You Than You



Be patient in the progress
Through the stress, you will evolve
At times, it seems monotonous
But never weaken your resolve

All the tears, blood and sweat
They gather in the same puddle
That’s old you and don’t forget
There’s strength built from struggle

I hope these words help you last
Through anger, tears and smiles
Build a better you than your past
Always build triumph from the trials

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Becoming a better version of you

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Written on June 25, 2023

Submitted by Sumbroman on July 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BCBC DXDX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 397
Words 71
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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