Memorial Day



Memorial Day

Some memories persist,
Resist forgetting,
Forever pestering,
Me to remember
Something I’d rather forget.

In a swampy expanse,
In pursuit of the enemy,
We walked beside each other,
As we swept toward a
Looming confrontation.

Not knowing his name,
But knowing his presence,
In a palpable atmosphere
Of expectation, of fear,
A finger on the trigger.

And in an instant,
Shots are flying
Past my head or raising geysers
In the knee-deep swamp,
Shots fired in desperation
By the cornered enemy,
Choosing death over surrender,
Fired until our bullets
Left them sprawled in bloody poses,
Left them mutilated and silent.

In that instant of terror,
The one beside me is falling,
Falling in that relaxed way
Being shot renders one
Limp and collapsing.

Without hesitation,
amid the chaos,
focused only on helping,
On preventing him sinking  
Into death in the water,
I cradle him, crouching,
Pulling him closely,
A wound in his chest,
Green fluid seeps from his lips,
Whites of his eyes only visible,
Strange noises escaping his
Unconscious mouth,
The death rattle imminent.

His name was Danny Gray,
I found him years later,
Searching The Wall,
Knowing the day he died
And his unit,
Company C,
Second Wolfhounds,
Knowing fate, that morning,
Left me still another day,
And still another memory.

About this poem

This poem is about a memory of someone who died in my arms after being shot during combat in Vietnam.

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Written on May 31, 2022

Submitted by on July 23, 2023

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Scheme XAABX CDBXE XXFFB GAXXEDBXXG BAHEA EXAABADXXXXXG HBXXXDCAHD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,313
Words 265
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 10, 5, 13, 10

Karl Michel

My service in the Vietnam War has shaped my life in significant ways. For one thing, it led me to becoming an artist as a means of dealing with the emotional trauma I experienced there. My visual art and poetry share the same intuitive connection to the war. Most poems begin with a first line I hear in my head. After that, I try to stay out of the way and let the poem develop unimpeded by too many meddling thoughts. It's as if I'm just the conduit, the means of delivering the message. And the message is often one that speaks to my struggle to reclaim emotions and to find meaning. more…

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