Time Stop Modern



Friends and family
Live on the wall
In the modern times its our call
What is deplorable
Minds open to modern idea
        Explorable
Modern life abstract at the seas

Busy- racing- pacing
New ideas prays and pleas
Instagram all adorable
Finding time reasonable
     Stars do they work out
           Suitable
What we justify- testify

Time stop where you think
        Timeless -Theory
Modern shapes can we escape
Babies and pets multiply
       Feeling isolated  
 Re-opens two loves get- planted
   Modern home people

   Overacted but attracted
       Time stop modern
Your ancestry over the hill rated
Modern look new century
Skin of purity face lift
 Modern apple tree
Freshly computer mated
Modern world a match dated

About this poem

Time is racing but when we stop to think does it seem truly modern or we living so in the past. Do our modern eyes have the right theory. Let's reframe the high ceiling modern fixture we cannot reach

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Submitted by on July 11, 2023

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Scheme ABBCXAD XDCCXCE XAXEFFC FXFAXAGG
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 741
Words 132
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 8

Robin Carretti

Hello I grew up in the City always loved nature also see the beauty in words. I am caring person married I love yoga to relax at moment. If I can help someone through my writing that means everything to me. more…

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  • geoffnet2000
    Your thoughts within your words holds your secrets, a lot is missing that explains the reason why you wrote this. As in a style, all stories have a beginning middle and an end with two climaxes that lead you through the middle to the end. Those events are what will define who you are, what happened to you and how this event or events caused you to write. Tell your story. 
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