Died orchestra.



I saw you standing,
on the border of love,
the air was saturated with resin,
and suddenly I didn't know if it was the mountains in the background,
or your bare breasts,
unrest swirled in me.
You were like glass,
the wind caressed your thighs,
more and more pleasant,
but you were disappearing for me.
Only your soul remained,
and it had nothing more to give me.
Every time I meet you,
it's as if the orchestra died in me...
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Written on June 10, 2023

Submitted by jozef_m on June 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIFJFKF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 436
Words 93
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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2 Comments
  • iank.23085
    After reading this poem, I was filled with thoughts and feelings about the the creative process of the whole poem. It was very interesting about the imaginative thoughts that come to my head when reading this poem. I was interested on how the poem contained other aspects of life to describe a whole another meaning. 
    LikeReply9 months ago
  • Oakley
    the opening line
    LikeReply9 months ago

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