I hate when you loose hope

I HATE IT WHEN YOU LOOSE HOPE
after forgetting that the foundation
of your exhalation is right at the apex
of that worrisome escalation and that
Fear is but an artist whose  greatest
Crayon is manipulation creating a
little critical sound within you saying
' this is due to your miscalculation'

I HATE IT WHEN YOU LOOSE HOPE

After failing to befriend your inner critic
being rolled down by the velocity of your
negative thoughts into a ditch, preparing
Your feeble feet for a retreat and your
broken heart to quit