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Choices

Steve Cochrane 1955 (Cape)

Rhymed
When I was young, I hurt my back
But not enough to pay
Someone to make it go away
Or lessen each attack.

The doctor said I needed to
Learn how to manage it,
Since otherwise I was quite fit
And exercise will do.

That's what I've done though I do lack
The energy for all
The effort though I do recall
What caused pain in my back?

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Philosophy

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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on June 14, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on June 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBA CDDC AEEA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 329
Words 73
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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