I adore you Father



I adore you Father
For have made
Me to be your son
I never will forget
That you gave
Me the beautiful life
I live here on earth
I also don't fool around
With the health you gave me
Also I never overdosed
On my medication
I take my medication
Every day the way
My psychiatrist
Had prescribed
Them for me to take them
Also I am glad
That I have a father
That I can rely on
Every single day
Also father I never
Cursed at you
Because that is also
The wrong thing to do
You want me
To treat you with respect
And I will do that for you
My father
Also father you have thought
Some manners
A long time ago
I am always using my manners
Also I have brothers
That you had made
With you holy hands
Also father
I adore my brothers
Also my brothers are
Very good to me
They treat me with respect
And I respect them also
Father I am happy
To be your oldest son
I will not take my own life
Because that would be
The wrong thing to do
Also my life is very precious
And I live my life every day
The way I should live
I plan my life every day
And I try to get
The most out of my life
I am glad that you own
My life my father
And my life is in your hands
Also I want to see you happy
Every single day father
Because I do everything to make
You happy
At night father I am always praying
For you my father
Before I go to sleep
It only takes a couple of minutes
To do it
Then I go straight to sleep
Every night
I follow my bed schedule
That you father create for me
I never stay up past my bedtime anymore
I also get my 7 hours of sleep
Every single night
Today this morning I got up
Out of my bed
Feeling refreshed my
Father
Also you gave me father
A beautiful sunny day
That I had enjoyed very much
Father thanks for giving me
This beautiful day today

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