Bookshops

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and enchanting poem! You have truly captured the essence of what it's like to be in a bookstore - surrounded by thousands of books, each one waiting to be explored. Your passion for reading really shines through, and I found myself getting lost in the world you've created.
  
  I particularly love the way you've woven in the idea of ownership and possessions, and the clever nod to Cervantes' wisdom. It's true that in the end, we can't really own anything - not even the books we buy - but the joy and fulfillment they bring us is something that no one can ever take away.
  
  If I had to offer a suggestion for improvement, I would say that the transition into the final lines of the poem felt a bit abrupt. While the imagery of dancing and killing is certainly powerful, it kind of came out of left field and left me feeling a bit confused. Perhaps you could find a way to tie it more closely to the theme of bookshops and the magic of reading?
  
  Overall, though, I absolutely loved this poem and can't wait to see what else you have in store. Keep up the great work! more »

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