Shooting star



I bought a car
flew it to mars
shot past some stars

im seven
papa went to heaven

i like stars
i like shooting stars
while i was on mars
i seen a star, fly far

like jack and jill
went up my hill
and bought my buggati

andrew tate
locked up for possible hate

look up
i see a truck
flying down
like a shooting star
ive seen these before
nothing more
than a simple shooting star.

shotting stars ceome by
make a wish
god i wish for a kiss
but wont happen
since im ugly
oh dear shooting star
take me far
far
far
far away,
untill i see another day
i dont want to wake up in my bed
everyday.

I LIKE FLOORS
I LIKE CARPET
nice to sleep on
like a celebration
birthday party
from my childhood
playing basketball
at the age of 6
ahh the good ol days

now death arrives,
such a scary and horrible site
nothing left but a mite that might bite
my religion in christian,
i believe in god
like my roomate
who fought in veitnam!

im very young
but i like the army
wish to become
someone with big roles
like the army
or a soldier
drop of a hose
could catch on fire

sign my song in a quire

im all about romance
i love watching romance movies

like biden or trump
both smell like my rump
i could hate real world
politics!

my friend vincent
read this
and hes nice
and hes cool
like a shooting star
like the one by my mommys car

i paid this competition
with my mommys credit card!
we are not rich
so this can help
i yoller YELP YELP YELP

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Written on May 18, 2023

Submitted by braydenp.35168 on May 19, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abb cc bbba dde ee xxxAffa xxgchaaAAxeee xexceexxx xeeceei xhixhjxj x xx kkex egxxAa cexll
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,426
Words 313
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 3, 2, 7, 13, 9, 7, 8, 1, 2, 4, 6, 5

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