evolution?



wish my creator would reveal to me the things that I feel and I see!
  show Me all of the shit that has been driving me to my very fucking knees!
  I need some answers right now my God!            I know all of this you can definitely see!
  I need to know all that has haunted and tormented me tell me would you please!!?
  I'm waiting to see your face or hear your voice and I need it to be real clear for Me!
   cause I can't fucking figure out what to listen to or what to even continue to believe!
   this life has brought me to my breaking point and this generation is a new breed!
  break them down then build them up is what you people actually belive!
  build them up and keep them up is what I look for and forsee!
    this lost and broken world needs you Lord, reveal yourself pull back the curtains please!
    eternity together with you in heaven is where I really long to be!
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Written on May 27, 2023

Submitted by gregorywallis3 on May 27, 2023

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Scheme ABABACDCABA
Characters 889
Words 182
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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