Did In Paradise



And was in Eden fair a gard'ners want,
Whose pair did see a fruit to gain a f-ate!
For to a tree of suit desire did hunt,
To loot a break of don't for Godlly state!
How naked shown were they forsworn by greed?
To gr-asp by wrought a cl-asp in height of court,
Where g-ape of eyes in lusting's earnest feed,
Did crop to fetch the steal of heaven's
s-(th)-ought !
Yet by a His-(s) in this with She a Sire  !
They wore in leaves clothes hide their discover!
And by this sort of to'ch came passions fire?
To much a sow of bear by one lover  !
Thus by this pear tale of a told cannot,
Came gan's loss with expulsion's now begot!!

About this poem

Written while I was in Blackpool Victoria Hospital & Clifton Hospital Lytham circa 10/13 March 2023 after a stay of approx. 6 or 7 weeks and finished afew days after King Charles the 3rd's Coronation .and is iDedicated to The King On His Coronation!

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Written on July 05, 2023

Submitted by bradshaighb on May 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEDFGHHHHIG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 630
Words 137
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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