Your Hurt Is Mine
Your Hurt Is Mine
Your hurt is mine more than I know
Beyond the field of dreams
I made a burning hell
Words, actions and feelings
Made a total stranger of you
So thoughtless I roared
On you relentlessly
My heart turned
Mercilessly dark
And rightfully I am alone.
Your hurt is heavy on all of me
Raining on my conscience
How I wish I never hurt
You and your softness
Your love made real is
All I ever wanted
Now I sleep in the cold
The showers pour
My eyes know no relief
Until I heal you completely.
Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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How hurting the one you live hurts you, too
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Written on May 16, 2023
Submitted by charlesedwardyork on May 16, 2023
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| Words | 149 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 10, 10, 2 |
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