Analysis of Your Hurt Is Mine
Your Hurt Is Mine
Your hurt is mine more than I know
Beyond the field of dreams
I made a burning hell
Words, actions and feelings
Made a total stranger of you
So thoughtless I roared
On you relentlessly
My heart turned
Mercilessly dark
And rightfully I am alone.
Your hurt is heavy on all of me
Raining on my conscience
How I wish I never hurt
You and your softness
Your love made real is
All I ever wanted
Now I sleep in the cold
The showers pour
My eyes know no relief
Until I heal you completely.
Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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| Scheme | X XXXXXXAXXX AXXXXXXXXA XX |
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| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1111 11111111 010111 110101 110010 10101011 11011 110100 111 10001 01001101 111101111 101110 1111101 10110 11111 111010 111001 0101 111101 01111010 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 763 |
| Words | 149 |
| Sentences | 4 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 10, 10, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 23 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 152 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
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How hurting the one you live hurts you, too
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