My Oxygen



I have swum in the sea, went deep on it,
Fought with shark and skipped my death
Danced with clowns and asked the goldfish
          How would I find my love
                  My Oxygen!

I strolled in desert, glanced long to way
Run alone in heatwave, burned down my
                 Feet unconscious.
Wailing for water in thirsty and asked the camel
              How would I find her
                    My oxygen!

Bustled in station, darted into the stairs
Pushed thousand of people and
         Got punched back
Flow a litter of blood and broken my leg
Walked with twilights and burgled by them
           asked the twilight
    How would I find my happiness
               My oxygen!

Entered in kingdom, stared to the crown
Touched the golden throne and smell the
        Fragrance of Royal  garden
Caught by soldier, been permanent in jail
Cried the whole of night and asked the king
         How would I find my princess  
                  My oxygen!

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This a poem where, a boy finding his lover all across the world by describing her to Oxygen. Used different language variation to showing his love and passion to her!

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Written on February 10, 2023

Submitted by Tk5574572 on April 07, 2023

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Scheme xxxxA xxbxxA xxxxxxbA xxaxxxA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 968
Words 164
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 8, 7

Burhan Uddin

I'm a student at Oldham College, Manchester. English is my second language however, I love to writing poem in English. I'm currently doing Gcse English adults course. more…

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