Control

Miranda rice 1997 (Spring valley)



Haven’t been in charge
Never nothing very large
Given no lessons at all
Always taken as a small symbol
Mind is always spinning
Feels like no matter what
Never winning
It’s a battle that always causes rattle
So get up on your saddle
Get ready to go
Be a force from within
Don’t let this control win
We all have sinned
Feeling so oh so small
Never being able to catch yourself from a fall
You could have it all
Never let the forced control
Control it from
Your inner walls
Break
Smash
Tear it down
As controls
Have no controls at all

About this poem

About never being in control or taken seriously standing up for your own self! Taking charge!

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Written on February 12, 2021

Submitted by Mrs.mirandarice22 on May 02, 2023

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Scheme AABCDEDCCFGGHBBBIJKLMNOB
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Characters 557
Words 122
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

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