Completion



It's more like a Carlos Castaneda view
Unlearning what has been done to you
Taught to drive your self around
Look what has come to ground
Do you think when a bell is rung
Just like Pavlov's dog the day has begun
What makes your mouth water
Is it proper fodder
The things you were taught to have or have not
Have you ever given a thought
Plugged in hooked up and wired
Endlessly running until you grow tired
Where do you come from to play this game
Never pausing to reflect its a shame
Never stopping to listen
To the sound of falling rain
Never pausing to glisten
Just caught up with the vain
Break it down and crumble it up
Stitch it back together
From out of your cup
Look at what you've wrought
Then determine whether
It might be worth naught
Now see what has become of you
Behold you've been forged anew
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Submitted by Willbad on April 26, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCDEEFGHHIIDJDJKEKGEGAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 807
Words 156
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26

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