Sugar Into Snow



I spin it out,
this tapestry of thought,
and swear it's sugar into snow -
Abstracted bits of memory like starlight caught
in the flame of magnification.
No more, this sediment of
smuggled bliss,
But rather time slowed
down to the sound of dusky
shadows of the stolen day.
I'll look to you then,
as you were - as you seemed,
painting my feelings
with this pen
and placing them on this canvas
with all the delicacy
of the poet
finding saints in the snowdrifts.

About this poem

The voice of the poet struggles here to capture his thoughts about something he lost and remembers better than it actually was.

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Written on April 20, 2023

Submitted by JaceSon on April 20, 2023

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMKNOPG
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 458
Words 92
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

JaceSon P. Barrus

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