journey - go one - an unknown way



Something like this started the journey of this life.

There was no address of the destination, no way to meet.

Didn't know about the destinations, didn't meet the way.

Even then the eyes did not bow down, the steps did not stop.

That neither the eyes bow down, nor the steps stop on their way.

This is how the journey of this life started.



The eyes are searching for the paths and there is some hurry, the steps to walk on them.

That the eyes are searching for the paths and there is some haste for the feet to walk on them.

There is also a little fear in the mind, that while searching for the way, this mind may not go astray.

That the mind has some fear in such a way that it may not go astray while searching for its own path.

But the hopes have held the hem in such a way that even this fear got scared and lost its way on its own.

This is how the journey of this life started.




With you is the hem of hopes, with you is the faith of your loved ones, with you are faith, blessings and lots of blessings,

That there are hopes, faith, prayers, blessings and love of loved ones.

Still this mind is afraid that the hopes of all its loved ones may not be broken.

Still this mind is afraid that all the hopes of loved ones may get shattered.

If everyone's hopes are shattered, how will you face your loved ones.
Still there is a hope, still this mind that we have not lost, we will not let it lose, the faith of our loved ones, we will not let the effect of their blessings be less, their blessings and their love will bring color.

So the fear ran away, this time also due to fear, neither the courage nor the faith of this mind decreased.

This is how the journey of this life started.

About this poem

This poem is very special for me. Because is my first poem in my lifetime journey.

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Submitted by namitaraisgr on March 24, 2023

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Scheme x x a x a B c c a x x B x d x x dx x B
Characters 1,706
Words 375
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1

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