Eloquence



Yuri Y. Dudik
03/07/2023
Per. 4
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"To love for the sake of being loved is human. To love for the sake of loving is angelic."
Morning light is reaching its finger tips over the tree tops
trying to get a glimpse of us,
because we are beautiful women.
It catches us still lingering in our sweats,
the couch in the living room hasn't been folded up yet.
Blankets and pillows are sprawled around.
We aren't carefree
but we are happy.
Droopy morning eyes begin to shine with our smiles
but the self doubt
 rdoesn't try to hide.
 eWe are growing into women
Thin a place where it's hard to know
 owhat to become.
  rWe are learning hardships in our world,
 Gbut we know-even when we aren't sure of anything-
lwe have each other.
eWe love each other
yfor no better reason
nthen to love.
And we are not angels.

About this poem

For a forever friend.

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Written on November 09, 1999

Submitted by yuri810402002 on March 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDAEFGHIJKKLMNGODPQCCGRS
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 822
Words 165
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26

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  • damonlucas74
    Loved how evocative this poem is. It really captures the camaraderie of youth. The language is simple, poetic and warm. Loved the image of the Suns fingertips reaching over the trees! Really enjoyed this poem. 
    LikeReply1 year ago

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