Insomniac Slumber

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



I keep dreaming I'm awake
Clock on the wall loudly ticking
My image in a mirror makes me shake
Sweat on my brow constantly trickling

Propped up in a frozen position
My eyes reflection looking back at me
The room moves in a continuous rotation
Sleeping lightly with eyes open, it's what I see

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Written on April 08, 2023

Submitted on April 08, 2023

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 292
Words 55
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

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  • Teril
    Intersection between sleep and wakefulness- the boundaries are never all that clean and often scary. I like the imagery of your poem.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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