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Please be, bliss be

Lewteb 2000 (Kenya)

Coats so white, robes so tied
Head held high, sky hop hoped

Hearts dew drenched, world due saved
Dawn emblems , dreams Borgias beyond

Lo!

Pills o myriads, bills so crazy
E'm charge so nuts, yet all cozy

Pay so peanut, play oo bean't
Sad and dent, cry oo don't

Rock so bottom, pitch so high
Blues all day, books just nigh

Nurses so deify, doctors so deity
In turns we thread, interns we dread

Loo!

Coats now red, robes untied
Steths on chest, hearts on hand

Knots on necks, bodies on decks
Dreams o dreams o dreams

Please be, bliss be

About this poem

Like of dreams when we wish those of bliss, this poem navigates hope and despair among medical interns contrasting the depth of indifference in their ambitions and the sad reality. It's ending is sad with suicide the end game.

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Written on April 05, 2023

Submitted by Lewteb000 on April 05, 2023

Modified on April 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XX BB BX CC BX AX XX B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 550
Words 117
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
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