Analysis of Please be, bliss be



Coats so white, robes so tied
Head held high, sky hop hoped

Hearts dew drenched, world due saved
Dawn emblems , dreams Borgias beyond

Pills o myriads, bills so crazy
E'm charge so nuts, yet all cozy

Pay so peanut, play oo bean't
Sad and dent, cry oo don't

Rock so bottom, pitch so high
Blues all day, books just nigh

Nurses so deify, doctors so deity
In turns we thread, interns we dread

Coats now red, robes untied
Steths on chest, hearts on hand

Knots on necks, bodies on decks
Dreams o dreams o dreams

Please be, bliss be


Scheme AX XX BB BX CC BX AX XX B
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111111 111111 1101101 1111110 111111110 11101111 101111 1110111 111111 10110101100 01111011 111101 111111 1111011 11111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 550
Words 117
Sentences 3
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

Like of dreams when we wish those of bliss, this poem navigates hope and despair among medical interns contrasting the depth of indifference in their ambitions and the sad reality. It's ending is sad with suicide the end game.

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Written on April 05, 2023

Submitted by Lewteb000 on April 05, 2023

Modified on April 05, 2023

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