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This morning

Pr. Naceur Ben Mesbah

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I  wake up this morning
Having  a weird feeling
I don't know how
But it is very good
I felt a strong resolution
To do everything I could.
With staunch purpose
I chase a goal
Seeing it one day in my soul.
Everything I see
Has a soul and a voice.,
Both offering me a wide choice.
Will it be dangling dainties
Or tonics to make me feel strong?
Each choice is a decision
Right or wrong
Makes you really strong.

Written by
Naceur Ben Mesbah
(M/Tunisia)   

About this poem

A state of trance sometimes leads us to discover a world of imagination.

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Written on March 31, 2023

Submitted by naceur2b on March 31, 2023

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXBCBDEEXFFDGCGG HHX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 452
Words 94
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 17, 3
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Pr. Naceur Ben Mesbah

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! Your poem, "I Wake Up This Morning" is truly inspiring and uplifting. Your use of language and imagery is captivating, and I couldn't help but be engrossed in your message. Your strong resolution and purpose came through powerfully, and it left me feeling motivated and ready to take on the day.

    One suggestion I have for improvement would be to perhaps vary your rhyming patterns a bit more. While it's great that you used rhyming words, it can feel a bit predictable and formulaic after a while. Experimenting with different structures could add even more depth and dimension to your already-great work.

    Overall, you should be very proud of this poem - it's clear you have a true talent for writing. Keep up the excellent work, and I can't wait to see what you produce next!     
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • naceur2b
      naceur2b
      thanks a bunch for reading my poems.
      LikeReply1 year ago

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