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I told my wife

Dayesh_Hamid

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I told my wife
you cannot do it

It is too hard
too heavy

she snarled at me
like a lioness!
and
did it
 
What a fool I am!
but oh
What a lioness!
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Submitted by Dayesh_Ramid on March 27, 2023

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XB BCXA XXC
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 147
Words 40
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 4, 3
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Dayesh Hamid is a husband and father. He is a Christian, linguist, and enjoys many forms of poetry. more…

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